Dear Referee, I attach the draft of a paper by one of the students in my "Scientific Communication" class (unless I forgot to do so!). I have promised the students that an anonymous referee will look over their papers and make comments, criticisms and suggestions. While I urged my students to imagine that they were writing an article to submit to a journal, their abilities and efforts have covered a wide range. So I leave it to you to choose the standard by which you evaluate the paper you have received. Once your comments have been received, I am asking the students to revise their papers in light of the guidance you have provided. Our class ends on August 5th, but I am hoping your comments will reach me sooner than that! Thank you for agreeing to this thankless task! John